ARIANA`S


He ran away from his bedroom in the middle of the night and headed towards wherever his heart guided him. He somehow ended up in the middle of a cornfield in the countryside. There was a slight breeze but the weather was calm, and the temperature was perfect for a summer night. It was so quiet that you could only hear his heartbeats. Everything was calm until he unleashed his frustration and shouted.  (By Ariana)


He was sitting there, just admiring the moonlight of that summer night and something with a human shape began to appear. It was his father. Brian was frightened because he did not recognise who it was, so he started running away from him until he heard his father's voice. When his father said "Brian, stop! " Brian turned around and started running very fast towards his dad and hugged him. He had not seen him for years, because he was serving in Iran, and he killed General Soleimani. 

(by José) 


Brian had been waiting years for his father's return, he always dreamed about this situation, in an idealized way, just showing out the good things of his father.

After the surprise, they went back home and served a passion fruit tea flavored with wild spices. Brian wondered why it had taken so long for him to come, but his father did not seem as receptive as Brian expected, something was wrong, something was strange.. (By Hugo)


After a long conversation with his father, Brian was not totally convinced about him, he saw something strange on him, he wasn't the same as he used to be. Brian started to ask him questions that only his real father could have answered, and the apparent father responded wrong, suddenly Brian realised that he wasn't his father, so he ran away from the house while at the same time, this mysterious man took out a gun and followed him.

(By Pablo)


Brian run into the Woods, it was dark and he couldn't see anything so he tripped over some branches, hit his head and fell on the ground. When he woke up he found himself attached to a chair in the middle of an empty and strange room. For a few seconds he observed stunned what surrounded him: four brick walls, a door with no handle and a small tray containing a glass of water and a slice of bread. Suddenly the strange man from which he had run away before, opened the door, headed to Brian, untied his hands and told him to eat. (By Isabel)




Brian was scared and did not know if it was a trick, maybe the food was poisoned. But the strange man looked at him and told him to eat again. He was afraid and hungry so he decided to take a risk and eat. Brian wanted to have answers to all his questions. However, he thought it would be dangerous to ask the man as he could get angry. When Brian had finished the bread and the glass of water the strange man looked at him and said “What do you know about Elijah Hanks?”, Brian did not understand why he was asking about his father. By Sofía




So Brian just told him he hasn't seen him for 6 years now. He thought he was lying so he slapped his face. Brian started shouting and crying. The man told him " I'm gonna ask you again the question, while you think about your answer I'll present myself ". "My name is John Hanks", Brian looked at him surprised, that name was familiar to him. " I'm your father's old brother", that's why he looked like Brian's father. After this Brian asked him why he was here if he was supposed to be dead. 

By Moe




To what John replayed “Your father and I were planning to start a company together ,6 years ago ,everything was going according to the plan ,we both invested on the company ,but then your father scammed me . When I tried to report him to the police he tried to kill me , he thought I was dead ,everyone did ,and now 6 years later I’ve come back for my money and my revenge” Brian was so confused ,he didn’t know if John was saying the truth. By Roxana 





In typical movie fashion, John started explaining every single detail of his plan to poor Brian. Brian had so many questions at the moment, how did he end up like that?, was his dad who he thought he was?, was he going to die at that moment?. None of these questions had a clear answer, except the last one, as John told Brian he was not as useful as he thought he would be, and shot him in the chest. By Pedro 




Brian shouted, then he turned his head down to look at his chest. His brownish t-shirt was now bloody. He put his hands on the orifice to stop the flow of blood, but at this point, he had lost enough blood to faint unconscious to the ground. John stood up and called an ambulance, he just told them the place but he didn't mention who he was. He opened the door without touching it while he took his car keys out of his pocket. By Ana Pérez




Brian was carried by an ambulance to the hospital, but he had lost too many blood, and he was in a medically-induced coma for three days. Unfortunately, it had been too late for poor Brian, and he died, being buried two days later in Charleston Cemetery. Brian died with neither testament or known descendants, so there was a dispute over his property in Manhattan.  By Miguel de Perosanz




While all this events were happening, Brian’s father was returning home with his family, but he took more time than expected because he returned home through boat because they were scared of Iran, that could send them a missile because of killing Soleimani. 

When he arrived and he discovered that his only son was dead he fell in a great depression. As he was a very important militar, he appeared in the news, so Elijah noticed it very quickly. By Gonzalo




John had no idea of who would have killed his son, so he went to the crime scene. The police told him they hadn't seen anything strange, but that were going to do an autopsy anyway. Elijah was devastated and went home, he drunk until he fell asleep. The next morning, a call woke Elijah up, they found something strange during the autopsy. There was a note in a capsule in Brian's stomach, it stated: "Welcome back,little brother". By Andrés




He flipped the piece of paper and on the other side some coordinates were written. So he decided to go to that location. It turned out that the place in cuestion was all the way in Japan. He took a flight there and when he got to the little village the coordinates referred to, he couldn’t imagine what was going to happen. Manuel Ruiz




After all the long journey to Japan, he was really tired, so at first he thought he was dreaming but after one or two minutes trying to believe what was happening at that moment he pinched his arm to prove that he wasn’t having hallucinations, because he couldn’t believe what he was seeing, his brother who was supposed to be dead was there,standing in front of him. Elisa




Elijah was sure he had murdered and buried John. He couldn't understand how that was possible. After some minutes watching each other, John explained that he had been rescued by Anna, Elijah's wife, who had betrayed him. As he said that, she appeared behind Elijah and stabbed him with a dagger. She didn't kill him, she only weakened him in order to make easier the process of kidnapping. Jacobo




After a couple of days sleeping, Elijah woke up in a weird room. It was kind of small and completely white, with just a small bed in the middle and apparently a hole with bars in the top of the door. Not a while after he woke up, Anna entered in the room followed by a soldier whose face was cover with a mask. Laura




Elijah thought he had dreamed everything which had happened next until the couple entered in the room. He couldn't look at his wife face. He knew that their marriage hadn't been easy, but he never thought that she was able to kill her own son. He was worried when he didn't Anna in his house when he arrived back home, fearing she was prisoner of Brian's murder, but she was an accomplice. Unless she didn't knew about it… By Javier 




John didn't tell Anna about Brian's death so Elijah screamed her to watch the news so she would know that the person she was working with had killed her only son. After that John knew she would be a problem so he also trapped her in the room with Elijah. Sergio V




John had both of them secured with a Yakuza traditional system which was impossible to hack.Little did John know what was going to make Elijah. When he had been out of home, he had some contacts with FBI agents, so with a single phone call, he would have the entire FBI under his orders. He asked his brother to go to the bath, and phoned his colleagues. Nicolás Bagur




After that Elijah phone call, some sirens from the FBI cars began to be heard, getting closer and closer. Until John realized they were there, at his house. He didn’t know what to do, his nerves did not allow him to move, so all he did was take out the gun and shoot Elijah, but he took aim. Then an FBI agent came in and threw himself at John. Ana Baños




But it was too late, Elijah Hanks had passed away. John got taken down by six FBI agents, and he was found guilty of the murders of Brian and Elijah Hanks, and for other crimes. He was sentenced to death penalty, but he did not care, he had finally got revenge on his brother, who had causes him all this pain and suffering, he would die a happy and accomplished man. On the other hand, nobody knew where Anna was. Carlo Cabrera




She’d managed to escape the whole ordeal while the FBI agents were detaining John and attending Elija’s wounds. She ran to the cornfield where she knew her son Brian would go when he felt suffocated by the burdens of life. She laughed to herself at the thought of him believing that his midnight detours would go unnoticed by her. Anna’s soft chuckles were followed by mournful cries. Her rage towards her husband when she found out about his attempted murder had made her irrational, and she never though for a moment that Josh would dare to envolve her son. She hated herself for her imprudent actions. Alexa C.




She didn’t felt comfortable being herself  anymore, she wanted to escape that horrible life so she had her name changed to Riley Reid and moved to Florida where she met an insane and young man who changed her life, his name was Gazzy Garcia. They  started a new family and Gazzy found a work in a discography which made them extremely wealthy. Happy ending :) -Stefan

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  1. The beginning of the story is very moving and intriguing. Brian is a vulnerable character, making it easy to empathise with him. The story becomes more and more gruesome, and what I thought to be an untouchable protagonist, is killed. The focus radically changes from the boy's dissatisfaction with family life to the actual causes of their distaste towards each other, all related to betrayal in some capacity - Elijah, who took advantage of John and stole from him during business affairs; Anna, who cooperated with John; and of course, John himself, who took revenge upon his brother by killing his son, betraying his ally, Anna, in the process.

    The story is cohesive and doesn't leave many plot holes, so there was an high degree of cooperation. And despite being so grim, it ends on a positive note (mostly).

    - Alexa C.

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