HUGO'S
Once upon a time there was a king, an old king. His name was Herald, and he
ruled over all Finland.
The first man who conquered the whole country and had the full power of it,
but every great power carries a great responsibility.
VIII century, different towns of Finland are revealing, Herald needs to be
dethroned, people are starving, blood is constantly being spilled. By Hugo
North towns joined forces against Herald, forming an army of twenty
thousand men, including horses, knights, squires and more. On the other hand,
Herald prepared his kingdom against the imminent attack of the north towns
alliance. But what he didn’t know is that an assassin was already in the
kingdom, who's orders were to get into the royal family and become the
right hand of the king Herald. By Pablo
Eirík was now like a brother to Herald, he was aware of all the plans and took part in most of the important
decisions. He had become a new member of the royal family, as planned. The
important day was getting closer but he had control of everything. Eirík had
been studying every movement Herald kingdom would do and communicated it to his
king, the betrayal was already done. North towns knew perfectly how to act in
order to defeat them, there was nothing Herald could do, he was about to lose
everything. By Isabel
A massive battle took place around the castle between the Northern army against
the royal army. The Northern people knew the king’s army strategies thanks to
Eirík. Even though they knew how to act in every situation, they had some
trouble as the royal army was stronger than expected and some of the Northern
people died. However, they did not give up and fought until they defeated
king’s army. They entered into the castle, where Eirík was waiting. By Sofía
When the Northern King, Fabio, and all the Northern army entered they
closed the gates of the castle. Eirík was sitting in the throne as a King but
he wasn't wearing the crown which looked suspicious. Fabio asked him where was
Herald, when suddenly soldiers started to appear from different places. They
started fighting and the Northern army was defeated, Fabio was the only one that
left alive. Later Herald showed up and said " I'm here Fabio". By Moe
What happened is that at first Eirík was going to betray Herald , but when
he was getting to know him better he realized that he was falling in love with
him, a feeling he never had before , as a consequence he confessed. After
explaining everything to Herald , they made a plan to defeat the Northern army
but they wanted Fabio alive ,Erik and Herald were doubting about the punishment
for Fabio ,but a brilliant idea came to Herald’s mind. By Roxana
Herald to parade through the Northern Kingdom’s territory, with Fabio half
naked, humiliating the figure of their ruler. After that, Fabio signed a treaty
in which Herald was given the reigns of power of the Northern Kingdom, he was
given the name of Herald the I, great emperor of Scandinavia. Eirík became the
ruler of the Northern territory, as a reward to his loyalty towards Herald.
They started training a new military order in order to prepare for an attack on
the Southern territories. By Pedro
The southern territories, whom had observed everything that happened
before, were totally prepared for attacking Herald. They knew Herald's military
order wasn't ready, it was the perfect time of attacking it. They didn't doubt
a second, so that same day at 18:00 their army entered Heralds kingdoms. By Ana
The first important battle had started. Tampere, a border town between both
kingdoms, was besieged by the Southern Army. The Southerners’ leader was an old
man called Tabor, who had loyally served in the army before the civil war.
Tabor’s troops quickly surrounded the city, helped by their superior boats
which allowed them to control Lake Näsiselkä. In just eight days, the third
city of Finland surrendered to General Tabor‘s troops. By Miguel
Herald was shocked, he did not expect an attack like that one. He was
planning to put troops on the frontier, but at that moment Erik decided to
declare his love towards him, the worst moment possible. Herald did not have
that feeling too, so he sent Erik to jail, because at that time homosexuality
was seen as a very big crime. By Gonzalo
Eirik felt fooled. After all he and Herald had gone through, sent to jail
like a rat. This broke his heart, making revenge the only thing Eirik wanted.
Meanwhile, Herald was watching how all he got was going down. He didn't know
what to do, he was completely blocked. He was so stressed that didn’t pay
attention to the fact that, his most loyal friend, was in jail for loving him. By Andrés
As a result of the anger that filled him, he needed to escape from there.
So he started studying the behavior of the guards, the timetables, he even made
a map out of the things he saw by the window. Two months after they were locked
in, he already had a perfect plan. But one thing was missing, Eirík, the love
of his life. He had worked so hard to escape but he would be empty for his
whole life if he didn’t find a way to break him out. Manuel Ruiz
After a lot of thinking Herald decided to go rescue Eirík from the
dungeons, when he arrived there, Eirík didn’t want to see him. Herald started
begging him, after a long time begging Eirík, he decided to hear Herald. Herald
explained him the situation. He told him that the moment that he chose to
confess his feelings, wasn’t a good moment and he also admitted that all this
time, that Eirík was in the dungeons, he thought a lot about him and he
realised that he was in love with him too. Elisa
However, just before they could exchange love vows, a soldier entered the
dungeons shouting that the Southern army had arrived and besieged the citadel
of Jötum, right by Herald’s castle. The king, due to their desperate situation,
decided to flee through the catacombs and set course towards the dark woods of
Myrkviðr. There, him and Eirík would search for the four Divine Weapons that,
legend said, were hidden within the bark of the World Tree, Yggdrasil: Mjölnir,
the Thunder Hammer; Gungnir, the Heavenly Spear; Mystletainn, the Earthen
Sword; and Fimbulvetr, the Ice Crosier that could turn into the Fire Whip. With
these weapons, their victory would be guaranteed. Jacobo
Herald imprisoned Eirick because after all, he knew his big ability
to plan military strategies, not only after having observed the movements of
his enemies, he was also one of the best of the kingdom at doing those
strategies in times of stress and when there was not much time to act or not
many options to carry out. Laura
With no time to lose, they rapidly changed their clothes in order to look
as if they were peasants. They left Fabio as the ruler of the empire, because
Fabio wanted to see their empire falling down, but the only thing he hated more
than Herald was Tabor. That man was about to rule over the whole north and had
to avoid it. They took the horses and went there as fast as possible. As they
were leaving, they decided to go around the Tabor's army base camp and see what
they were planning. They were terrified because of the hundreds of knights and
weapons that were waiting. They should be fast if they wanted to have a chance
to win. Javier
When they arrived to the dark woods of Myrkviðr they weren't alone, one
part of Tabor's empire was there too, but they were just covering that part of
the battlefield, they didn't know about the four divine weapons. They arrived
in complete silence so they couldn't see them, to hide they climbed on top of
the Raknøverû Holy Tree, the Tree where the four divine weapons were supposedly
hiden. They waited until the army moved on to another part of the field and
that's when they started digging. Sergio Vara
They dug for a while. They were rubbing their hands and inevitably their
lips too. At that moment, they were completely forgetful about the war. The
only thought they had was the passionate kiss. That feeling did not last too
much as Herald felt really guilty. Without uttering a single word they
continued digging in order to unearth the Four Divine Weapons.Nicolás Bagur
They began to hear many footsteps, getting closer and closer. It was
Tabor's army. One of them had seen them coming. All those who had gone to
dig, hid, but only one of them ran out of hiding and was the one who was caught
and shot instantly. That man was the best friend of another man who was hiding
there, and the anger that he had inside exploded and made him come out of his
hiding place and start fighting against Tabor's army.Ana Baños
The group of soldiers from the Northern territory was tiny compared to
Tabor’s Southern guard. These brave warriors fought with all their heart, but
they were defeated and captured, all except Eirik, who had managed to escape
just in time. He knew the battle was lost unless he got the Four Divine
Weapons, but he didn’t care about that, he had lost his loved one, Herald, and
he could only assume how badly he would be tortured. After moments of grief, he
decided to wait until the guards went, and he would continue digging the
tunnel, knowing this might the only way he could save his only reason for
living, Herald. Carlo Cabrera
He swung his axe with desperation, each time hitting the trunk with more
strength. He let out a painful screech, feeling helpless and overwhelmed by the
fear of losing the one he loved. The handle snapped in half, and he punched the
tree repeatedly with his fists, almost like a child hitting their parents and
asking for their toy. His knuckles were covered in blood and splitters, yet he
wouldn't stop. His cries grew louder until he collapsed onto his knees and
sobbed into the palms of his hands. Though through his pale fingers he could
see a light, coming from the tree, shining through. Alexa C.
A dazzling beam of light which blinded him started shining from a hole in
the bark of the tree, Eirik should have taken his eyes off the beam but he
wanted to continue looking at it until the only thing he could see was a spear
getting out of the tree. The tree stopped shining but Eirik didn't stop seeing
it, he was blind, but when he handled the spear he could perceive everything
around him, he could close his eyes and still manage to know where every
obstacle is. Eirik realised this spear was Gungnir, a spear given by the great
Odin which guided everyone that handled it towards victory and gave them insane
power and skill. -Stefan
Eirik was alone so he decided to grab one more weapon. He chose the
Ice Crosier, that would turn into the Fire Whip, and went with the mission of
saving his dear Herald. It was night time, so Eirik decided to enter where
Herald was imprisoned. Eirik, with the help of the two weapons, killed the
guards and was able to liberate Herald. They were capable of escaping without
anyone seeing them and rode two horses to go grab the weapons that were left in
the World Tree. That way they could come back and fight the enemies. Ariana.
Eirik and Herald came back to the battlefield with every legendary weapon
so they gave some of them to their allies. In almost no time they defeated the
majority of Tabor's army. Tabor was imprisoned and sentenced to death in the
gallow. The survivors of his army decided to surrender and pledge loyalty to
Herald and Eirik, which then ruled the kingdom together. Fabio also pledged
loyalty to them. Herald and Eirik also decided to rule Finland in a better way,
and taking more care about the population, which led Finland to be a prosperous
country. The End
Jose
I like the setting and the idea of the story, and it was executed fairly well, but the romance feels really forced from the beginning, and does not fit the narrative of the story, but the story is good anyway.
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