PABLO`S
In a fantasy world, whatsisname I don't remember, there was a pirate named
Roger, who became the most powerful and rich pirate of the world. Just before he
died, he got all his wealth buried in a safe place, that no one has ever known.
This marked the beginning of a new era, the pirate era, which drove all the
pirates to one purpose, finding the hidden treasure of the legendary pirate. In
a small village, a young man named Nelson left his home and got into the sea in
order to find this treasure. By Pablo
It was July 18, it had been two days since Nelson left land, he still
hadn't seen any clues as to where the desired treasure might be. Nelson did not
travel alone, he had his parrot with him, which constantly repeated everything
he said. One night the animal started saying "Jack, Jack, my name is
Jack", Nelson was undoubtedly surprised, he stirred the entire boat from
the stern to the bow in search of some hidden pirate who wanted to steal his
treasure, but found nothing. Now he had more important things to think
about, however this idea still on his mind. By Isabel
Time passed by and Nelson and his parrot were getting closer and closer to
the island where the treasure was meant to be hidden. Nelson had forgotten
about what his parrot said until one day he heard some steps on his boat. He
unsheathed his sword and went to look for someone. After an hour looking all
over the boat he could not find anyone or anything unusual. So once more, he
just forgot about it and continued his way to the treasure island. By Sofía
The day finally arrived. Nelson was sleeping quietly when suddenly his
parrot starting saying “land,land,land”. He got up right away, and checked if
what the parrot was saying was right. And indeed it was, Nelson started jumping
of happiness and started shouting “I'm gonna be the richest person in the
whole world”. Once they arrived in the mainland, he couldn't see things well as
it was foggy, he jumped out of the boat when suddenly he hears and sees steps
through the wet sand. By Moe
That’s when he realized that he wasn’t alone , he tried to see if there was
any other boats around the island but that wasn’t the case . There were two
only possibilities , the first one that came to his mind is that all this
time he wasn’t alone and that there was someone on the boat with him .The
second possibility is that maybe there was a castaway in the island all this
time .To check if it’s first hypothesis was right ,he decided to look around
the boat to see if he could find anything that belonged to the mysterious
person. By Roxana
He wandered around the boat for half an hour, but he was unable to find any
evidence of the presence of another person. He decided, as the sun was still
shining bright, to explore the remote island, in order to find the treasure he
had been seeking for his whole life. At first, he did not find anything that
lead him to believe that that island was the one he had been looking for, but,
after days of unfructuous exploration, he found a tribe of locals sacrificing
another pirate. By Pedro
He smiled for a second, but it didn't last long. Lots of thoughts filled
his mind. "What if another pirate got the treasure first?" "What
if the tribe has it?". "What if the tribe finds me and sacrifices
me?" Unfortunately one can't stop thinking, so he tried his best to focus
on the main point. What should he do next. Asking the locals wasn't an option,
and continuing searching was pointless, he had been actively searching for the
past days and found nothing. By Ana
Pérez
Nelson was growing increasingly desperate, and suicidal thoughts started to
enter his mind. One night, he ran towards a cliff and fell into a trap covered
by leaves which avoided the fatal incident. He fell down a small hole filled
with dynamite, but, luckily it did not explode. Thus, the pirate started to
wander through a series of small cavities, searching for the way out. When he
was losing all hope again, he encountered an old parchment with a map on it. By Miguel de Perosanz
Nelson instantly thought that it was the map of the
treasure, and he started to run for it following the map. When he thought that
he was close to it, he saw that the treasure was under a really big palm tree,
he started caving without knowing that it was the tree in which the tribe did
the sacrifices, and after five minutes caving he did not find the treasure,
instead he found some human bodies that were buried, after seeing it he
listened some voices saying ‘Abduscan kebab durum mixto’. By Gonzalo Quintanilla
Nelson was completely frightened. He saw some locals
that were aiming at him with bows, so he ran as fast as he could, until he lost
them. He returned to the boat thinking that he had lost all this time and effort.
When he entered the boat he saw something that shocked him. A man had cooked
his parrot and was eating it. When the man saw Nelson he said: “Hey, I’m Jack.
At last we meet each other!” By Andrés
Rodríguez
Nelson, at first, was rageous about the fact that he
had killed his parrot, and charged towards him. Surprisingly, Jack was a karate
master and knocked him down. When he woke up, Jack had already set sail
somewhere. Shocked, Nelson started scanning the boat and saw a big chest opened
and with a slight glow around it. Jack had found the treasure! Manuel Ruiz
Nelson, really confused, asked Jack about how he
managed to find the treasure. Jack told him that treasure he found wasn’t the
real treasure, this one was only a hint for the real treasure. Nelson
approached the big chest and saw that the glow that was around the chest was
only an illusion. Nelson asked Jack to join forces and search together he
treasure, little did they know what was going to happen next… Elisa
Following the instructions of the mysterious hint,
both pirates sealed for months in order to find another island. During the trip,
they surprisingly form a ever-lasting friendship, they felt as if they were
siblings and could share everything they thought.
When they landed on the island, they found near the
shore a man and a women both fainted due to unknown reasons. After a day, both
of them, regain consciousness but neither of them remembered what happened.
However, Nelson and Jack weren’t paying attention. Nelson could only focus on
the beautiful complexion of the women and her delicate hands. On the other
hand, Jack could only look to the man’s gorgeous muscles and to his strong
hands, that seem to be able to lift any weight. Jacobo
Nelson and Jack had a long discussion about what
should they do with the woman and the man, and after awhile they concluded that
both could be useful for them at some point, but neither could they tell about
the true objective of the long journey. A few days passed until both were
completely cured and know it was time for Jack and Nelson to explain them “what
were they going to do now on”. Laura
Days passed by until one morning, the man, named
Kukumuru, asked them where were they going. Nelson was very nervous and he lied
them telling that they were trying to go around the world in 80 days, but
obviously they didn't believed him and they were obligated to make Kukumuru and
Kawasgua, the woman, prisoners. Little did they knew that Kukumuru and
Kawasagua were running away from Mitsubishi, the car business that wanted to
capture every tuna in the world. That was a secret, but they both knew it and
they were being persecuted to kill them. It was a matter of days to the armed
ship of Mitsubishi to find them and sink them. Javier Vallejo Terraza
They wanted to keep the secret but they also wanted to
leave and move to another side because being on the same spot for a long time
didn't benefit them.
Nelson and Jack wanted to look for the treasure and
they didn't want to leave until they had looked everywhere in that island.
Kukumuru and Kawasagua had plan, they were going to offer them help to find the
treasure but that wasn't just for being nice. The next day they offered help
and Nelson accepted so they all started looking for it. After a couple hours
Jack and Nelson decided to go back to the boat to eat something and once they
got back the boat wasn't there, it had been stolen by Kukumuru and Kawasagua. Sergio Vara
But that was not the worst thing that could happen to
them. The japaneses had left on their clothes a GPS tracker, so Mitsubishi
would seek for Jack and Nelson instead of them.
They were completely isolated in the island. Instead
of sitting down and wait, leaving his life to the fate, they started collecting
and harvesting everything that could be useful for them to escape from there.
Nelson was in the top of a mountain and, suddenly he found a grotto. Without
thinking it twice he entered. Nicolás Bagur
There was no light in that grotto, so Nelson took out
a match and lit it. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. There were
cave paintings on the walls. Some showed the treasure and people with
weapons, chasing others. Then he turned and saw it there. A painting of
the treasure map. At that moment he began to jump with joy. Until he stepped on
one thing that the sound of the creaking rumbled through the cave. He
looked at what the thing he had stepped on was and he was very scared. Ana Baños
The cave was an elaborate trapped designed by
Mitsubishi, in order to capture everyone that escaped from them. They both fell
into a small metallic cage, which closed as soon as the touched the floor.
After two days without feeding nor drinking, they were finally graced by the
presence of two men in black clothes, holding guns. Both men were shocked, as
they were expecting to see Kukumuru and Kawasagua there. They phoned a man who
both pirates supposed was there boss.Carlo Cabrera
They were dangerously dehydrated, so seeing as they
weren't the people they were expecting to find, the men in black were kind
enough to toss them a waterskin each. The two pirates drank it in seconds, and
almost cried from how good it tasted.
From the phone could only be heard the distorted
yelling of the furious boss, who was calling the two men "idiots" and
"incompetent bastantards," along with some other sweet nothings.
Eventually he hung up and they both looked at the pirates. "Do you know
anything about a man and woman called Kukumuru and Kawasgua respectively?"
Jack and Nelson looked at each other before looking back at the two men and
nodding. Alexa C.
They proceeded to tell the men in black all they did
know about Kukumuru and Kawasagua, which didn’t give them the information they
were looking for. The men in black thought they were lying so to make them
speak, they killed Jack. Nelson could care less about him, after all it was his
fault they were there and he just brought him to bad situations overall. But
Nelson was scared as they could do the same thing with him, so tried to help in
everything he could. -Stefan
If he cooperated and was open to help them, he
would gain time and could think about his next step. In the end, he had nothing
to lose, he had lost Jack, his parrot, and the boat, so that was the only
option he had. The men in black gave Nelson a second chance to speak. Nelson
had told them the exact same version as before but this time, the two men
looked at each other and agreed on believing him, they had seen the honest look
Nelson had in his eyes. Eventually, they would liberate Nelson, but not for
free, he would have to do something in return… Ariana
Nelson wouldn't be liberated until he had to
help them find Kukumuru and Kawasagua. Luckily for Nelson, while everyone was
sleeping in the ship during nighttime, he realised that the ship they were in
had emergency boats, so with a lot of stealth, Nelson stole one of those boats
and he continued his journey in order to find the treasure. Suddenly, a huge
beam of light emerged from the sea. Nelson could not see what it was, he could
only hear a voice saying:"If you are looking for the treasure, you must
do good for everyone with it, because if not, there will be very bad
consequences for you. The treasure is located on the island of 'Candilandia'.
When you get there, a very wise man with the name of Dyeī Pelëegro will decide
if you are prepared or not for this treasure. " The figure
disappeared, and Nelson fainted. He woke up in a beautiful island three days
later, and a very tall, old man with white hair said:"Finally. I've
been waiting for your arrival. Welcome to Candilandia". Jose
Nelson was astonishingly sorprised, he had never seen
an island like that, it was different. After a long talk with these wise man and
several conflicts, Nelson could saw the treasure.
At first, he did not believe it, the “treasure” was
totally dissapointing, there was just a small coin, it was strange like if it
was of an unknown material, but there was only one. Nelson almost left the
place without taking it, but just because of the effort to found it.
One year had passed since the discovery of the
treasure, Nelson was the poorest man in the Capital. His friend and his parrot
were death, he only had the small coin, which he did not know what to do with.
The little coin became like an amulet for him, but it kept being useless.
In order to eat, just to eat, he went to sold the
coin, at least it could gave him for a piece of bread.
The life reward Nelson, the rare material was
lapislazuli, the most expensive valued material. Nelson even talked with the
governor of the Capital for doing the selling.
This coin was unique, exotic, the solution to Nelson’s
life.
In conclusion, after selling the coin, Nelson became
sorprinsingly rich.
He was able to lived without any problem for the rest
of his life. After all of this, he learned the lesson of not understimating
something that at first seems useless, cheap, seedy. -Hugo
What I don't like about how my history ended is that I expected more imagination, I even started saying "in a fantasy world" so I didn't like that my classmates wrote down the stereotypical pirate with his parrot... besides that I enjoyed reading it.
ResponderEliminarI think as Pablo, I expected too much about this story, finally it disappointed me.
ResponderEliminarWhen people think about pirates it seems that they just think about a parrot a typical boat and a wood leg. Hugo