JACOB'S


It was nine in the morning when an explosion surprised all the citizens of Luciel, capital of the Alliance of Free Cities. After this explosion, everyone was astonished, since, after the Holy War of Religions, all fire weapons were completely prohibited by the new Church of Light to avoid the catastrophe that caused the appearance of dark clouds that didn't let the light go through 100 years ago. Jacobo

The explosion occurred at the headquarter of Luciel, and the expanscent sling reached half of the city. The citizens were scared, confused and many of them didn't find the meaning to what was happening, because weapons, had been prohibited during the last hundred of years, which meant that no one was able to obtain any of those materials. Or, at least, they thought so. Laura

Disorientated and frightened, citizens ran in all directions. The distraction had been a total success. When smoke disappeared, the shape of a woman merged in the same position of the explosion. She was holding a gun and a red spray, which she used to write in the wall of the nearest flat. She wouldn't have much time, as police reinforcements would arrive  when they could dissipate the huge mass of people. The wall now showed the following statement: “The revolution has already begun. The Alliance is about to fall”. Javier Vallejo Terraza

The new revolution was officially declared and both sides of it declared the war to each other. The revolutionary side wanted to bring guns back so they could attack the classical side and get the power into their hands. The boss of the revolutionary side called and old friend he had in Iran to see if he could give them some of the most modern guns of the world. He told him he could have them but he needed to make him a favor first. The favor was that he needed to exchange him a microchip with all the revolutionary plans and attacks that they were going to take on the classic side but that was really dangerous because if that information went into the wrong hands they would never be able to defeat the state. Sergio Vara

In an act of trust and due to the extreme necessity to count with guns in order to attack their vulnerable rivals, this top secret information was transmitted via microchip unmarked in an Amazon delivery.

Andronus, whose real name was, Marcelo, was an undercover soldier who militated in the revolutionary side, but who had a tight relationship with the Alliance. No sooner he received the information, he locked himself in his room and phoned the President. At that moment someone knocked on the door.  Nicolás Bagur

It was a young scientist who knocked on the door. Marcelo had no idea who that man was or what he was doing there. The scientist new about the microchip and that's why he went looking for Marcelo until he finally found him.  He needed the information that was on the microchip for the research he was doing. This young man had discovered wormholes that would help the population relocate to another planet in the same conditions as they are now. Ana Baños

At first, Marcelo was skeptical, as the young man acted in a very suspicious manner, but he remember his conversation with the President, were he told him that he had found a way to secure victory in this military campaign. The young scientist and Marcelo started a practical on cosmology and astrophysics, which bored Marcelo to death. Carlo Cabrera

Despite his inicial disinterest, he started to somewhat enjoy the lessons. Perhaps it was the young Clyde's humorous approach that made them more tolerable, or just the fact that they'd become quite close. 

Three days into their lessons, after they'd finished their work for the day, these two were chatting over a glass of whisky. Clyde was telling Marcelo that he never thought he'd ever achieve anything of this calibre. He'd never thought much of himself, and felt like a disposable pawn in the grand scheme of things. But now, he'd been assigned a vital role in this real life game of chess. Clyde's smiling face was met with a bullet before he could say another word. The man who had burst through the door and shot the scientist was followed by thirty others who all pointed their guns at the man who had betrayed them. Marcelo had made a big mistake in underestimating the revolution. This was checkmate. Alexa C.

Marcelo didn't know what to do and how to prove himself not being a traitor so he did the first thing it came up to his mind,  running with the microchip and jumping through the window in a hope of saving his live, luckily for him a helicopter caught him in the air and there a man who claimed being from the government asked him for the microchip while pointing him with a gun, in desperation Marcelo gave him the microchip even though he knew this would mean his death, he was totally lost,  he was considered to be enemy from both of the sides. Stefan

Suddenly, the man that pointed him with the gun fell to the floor, someone had killed him. He turned his head and saw a sniper on his neighbors' window. He threw himself to the floor and got back his chip. At the same time, the helicopter started turning around. The pilot was also dead. Marcelo jumped off from the helicopter and fell to the community pool. When he pulled his head out of the water, he saw that everything around him was a disaster. Ariana

Marcelo decided to run away, but there was someone else chasing him. He did not have a clue on who it was, until he tripped over a stone and he hit his head.This caused him to lose consciousness. When he woke up, he was inside a military plane, he could not move because he was tied to a chair. Then, a person which had a mask on started interrogating him about the microchip and Clyde's research. Marcelo was confused because the voice of this person  sounded very familiar, but he could not remember why. José 




At the same time, a war was taking part in the capital, the revolutionary side were trying to take “Luciel’s Castle” were the royal court (government) lived. The revolutioners managed to get guns, no one knew were they took them.

The traditional side tried to stop the attempt of the revolution, but they were minor in number of soldiers, adding the fact that they did not have fire weapons, just melee ones. -Hugo

The man took off his mask and Marcelo sighed with relief when he saw that it was his boss and friend Lmao, the leader of the revolutionary side. Lmao thanked Marcelo for keeping the microchip at all costs but it was false, the real content of the microchip was 48 hours of cats videos. It was an specific plan designed by Lmao, he had already sent a copy of the microchip to the Iran government and they sent them the guns, that's how the revolutionary side had made the attack to Luciel's castle. The problem is that they have made another enemy, Irán… Pablo

When the leader of the Iranian government realised the trap that had been set  for them they became the biggest enemy that the revolution could imagine to have. They started their plan by joining forces with the government, it wasn't  much difficult as the Allies didn't know it was them who provided fire weapons to the revolutionaries. Irán main leader, had everything planned, he already imagined that this could happen and decided not to sold all the weapons they promised to the revolutionaries and keep a part, just in case, a part which now would be used against them. Isabel

Obviously, the first thing Iran cut of the weapon supply they were giving to Lmao. Moreover, Iran did not give their most powerful weapon to them, they did not even now about the existence of it. However, there was a big problem, an ethical dilemma. The weapon they had created was extremely powerful, it would probably kill many innocent people, but they were in the middle of a war. By Sofía




The revolutionary side was in a huge problem. Lmao didn't know how to handle the situation. Iran made an alliance with Luciel,now the government had access to fire weapons too. In that situation of panic, Emily, Lmaos girlfriend came to his room and slap his face. She told him "what the hell are you thinking about? You knew this was gonna happen we just need to follow the plan that we had". He looked at her and smiled, he started packing things up and went outside. By Moe




Lmao’s big brother was called Donald Trump and he was the president of the United States , he was the one that teached Lmao the importance of guns, and that is why Lmao started this war ,because Donald was a role model for him. So he called Trump telling him that as followed the plan they were going to need from him the best weapon ever known and more guns. So this way Trump got the USA into the war to help his little brother . Now the war was between the revolutionary side and the USA vs the classical side of the Alliance and Iran.By Roxana 

The royal court was celebrating, as they thought that with Iran in their side, victory was theirs, but, they did not know what Trump was planning to do, he would use this conflict to develop chemical weapons, which were considered illegal. After a series of minor battles all across the Alliance, Lmao and Trump decided to start their final plan, to isolate Luciel, and use chemical weapons to kill all the population, even though this ment killing some fellow revolutionaries, it would be for the best, as they thought taking the capital would bring an end to this conflict once and for all. By Pedro 

Somehow they isolated Luciel and killed the whole population. Trump couldn't be happier or more proud of his little brother. This didn't just mean war had finished, but also, USA demonstrated they had the better army, and the better weapons. However, some legal problems appeared on the table. The security committee of the United Nations wasn't happy with those illegal weapons. Huge consequences were about to happen. By Ana Pérez Narváez

The United Nations Security Council wasn’t happy about the genocide that had just been perpetrated, so Russia and the European Union voted to condemn the US Army’s actions, but the US Ambassador to the United Nations vetoed it. Tensions grew between the two sides. Finally, a month later, a coalition of Russia, Germany and France declared war on the United States. Italy did not join the fight because of an argument between the center-left PD and the Five Stars Movement over who was to be the commander-in-chief of a small army unit from the region of Calabria. By Miguel de Perosanz (IRL Italian politicians are as incompetent as the ones I describe here)

US was not prepared enough for the war, but somehow, no one knew how, they allied with their main enemy, North Korea, Kim Jong-un accepted a coalition with the US after a meeting he had with Donald Trump, in which Donald payed him some ladies for having some fun. They took Luciel’s army too, so there were the two most powerful army, strengthened by Luciel’s army against the most important countries of the EU and Russia. By Gonzalo Quintanilla




Marcelo was called up to the US army, and was ready to fight to defend the freedom they had finally brought to the Alliance. The Alliance was in a region of the Middle East, meaning petrol and natural gas were abundant, the reason why Trump decided to help his brother Lmao. The war started, and this conflict was the greatest war in the history of humanity, causing 80 millions deaths, but Marcelo was not one of them. By Andrés Rodríguez

Marcelo, after the fatal war was named vice president of the Alliance. Not long after that, Lmao, Donald’s brother died of a terrible disease. Marcelo was now the president and leader of his beloved country and was ready to defend it at all cost. He never liked Trump, and now they were in debt with him and had to pay a lot of the petrol money to the US government. So he decided to take a very complicated plan into action involving the death of the president of the United States. Manuel Ruiz




The plan was a total success, the president of US was dead and because of that, the debt was paid due to all the money Trump had hidden. Although the peace was restored in almost every country, Iran continue having some troubles with the US, people thought this would lead to another war because the ambience was really tense. After months of debating and discussion the solution to all the problems was reached and everything began to be great and peaceful again. Elisa



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  1. I really liked this story , the only thing i could change is some characters´s names like Lmao´s name because at first i couldn´t realize that ,that was a name.Despite that the story was really interesting.

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  2. It was truly a roller coaster. As you start reading, you expect the setting to be a magical fantasy world. It progressively becomes more realistic, when suddenly it is filled with action scenes, with people jumping out of helicopters and enemies breaking into high security facilities. After that, the comedic turn involving Donald Trump flips everything around once again.

    It's a little difficult to read, you have to pay a lot of attention and re-read a few fragments in order to keep track of who fighting who. But it is mostly coherent, and quite entertaining. Just when you think you know what's going to happen, you're hit with another plot twist.

    - Alexa C.

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  3. I really liked this story because while you are reading you can believe what is happening because everything is surrealistic and you are always intrigued about what is going to happen next.

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