JACOB'S
It was nine in the morning when an explosion surprised all the citizens of
Luciel, capital of the Alliance of Free Cities. After this explosion, everyone
was astonished, since, after the Holy War of Religions, all fire weapons were
completely prohibited by the new Church of Light to avoid the catastrophe that
caused the appearance of dark clouds that didn't let the light go through 100
years ago. Jacobo
The explosion occurred at the headquarter of Luciel, and the expanscent
sling reached half of the city. The citizens were scared, confused and many of
them didn't find the meaning to what was happening, because weapons, had been
prohibited during the last hundred of years, which meant that no one was able
to obtain any of those materials. Or, at least, they thought so. Laura
Disorientated and frightened, citizens ran in all directions. The
distraction had been a total success. When smoke disappeared, the shape of a
woman merged in the same position of the explosion. She was holding a gun and a
red spray, which she used to write in the wall of the nearest flat. She
wouldn't have much time, as police reinforcements would arrive when they
could dissipate the huge mass of people. The wall now showed the following
statement: “The revolution has already begun. The Alliance is about to fall”. Javier Vallejo Terraza
The new revolution was officially declared and both sides of it declared
the war to each other. The revolutionary side wanted to bring guns back so they
could attack the classical side and get the power into their hands. The boss of
the revolutionary side called and old friend he had in Iran to see if he could
give them some of the most modern guns of the world. He told him he could have
them but he needed to make him a favor first. The favor was that he needed to
exchange him a microchip with all the revolutionary plans and attacks that they
were going to take on the classic side but that was really dangerous because if
that information went into the wrong hands they would never be able to defeat
the state. Sergio Vara
In an act of trust
and due to the extreme necessity to count with guns in order to attack their
vulnerable rivals, this top secret information was transmitted via microchip
unmarked in an Amazon delivery.
Andronus, whose real name was, Marcelo, was an undercover soldier who
militated in the revolutionary side, but who had a tight relationship with the
Alliance. No sooner he received the information, he locked himself in his room
and phoned the President. At that moment someone knocked on the door. Nicolás Bagur
It was a young scientist who knocked on the door. Marcelo had no idea who
that man was or what he was doing there. The scientist new about the microchip
and that's why he went looking for Marcelo until he finally found him. He
needed the information that was on the microchip for the research he was doing.
This young man had discovered wormholes that would help the population relocate
to another planet in the same conditions as they are now. Ana Baños
At first, Marcelo was skeptical, as the young man acted in a very
suspicious manner, but he remember his conversation with the President, were he
told him that he had found a way to secure victory in this military campaign.
The young scientist and Marcelo started a practical on cosmology and
astrophysics, which bored Marcelo to death. Carlo Cabrera
Despite his inicial disinterest, he started to somewhat enjoy the lessons.
Perhaps it was the young Clyde's humorous approach that made them more
tolerable, or just the fact that they'd become quite close.
Three days into their lessons, after they'd finished their work for the
day, these two were chatting over a glass of whisky. Clyde was telling Marcelo
that he never thought he'd ever achieve anything of this calibre. He'd never
thought much of himself, and felt like a disposable pawn in the grand scheme of
things. But now, he'd been assigned a vital role in this real life game of
chess. Clyde's smiling face was met with a bullet before he could say another
word. The man who had burst through the door and shot the scientist was
followed by thirty others who all pointed their guns at the man who had
betrayed them. Marcelo had made a big mistake in underestimating the
revolution. This was checkmate. Alexa C.
Marcelo didn't know what to do and how to prove himself not being a traitor
so he did the first thing it came up to his mind, running with the
microchip and jumping through the window in a hope of saving his live, luckily
for him a helicopter caught him in the air and there a man who claimed being
from the government asked him for the microchip while pointing him with a gun,
in desperation Marcelo gave him the microchip even though he knew this would
mean his death, he was totally lost, he was considered to be enemy from
both of the sides. Stefan
Suddenly, the man that pointed him with the gun fell to the floor, someone
had killed him. He turned his head and saw a sniper on his neighbors' window.
He threw himself to the floor and got back his chip. At the same time, the
helicopter started turning around. The pilot was also dead. Marcelo jumped off
from the helicopter and fell to the community pool. When he pulled his head out
of the water, he saw that everything around him was a disaster. Ariana
Marcelo decided to run away, but there was someone else chasing him. He did
not have a clue on who it was, until he tripped over a stone and he hit his
head.This caused him to lose consciousness. When he woke up, he was inside a
military plane, he could not move because he was tied to a chair. Then, a
person which had a mask on started interrogating him about the microchip and
Clyde's research. Marcelo was confused because the voice of this person
sounded very familiar, but he could not remember why. José
At the same time, a war was taking part in the capital, the revolutionary
side were trying to take “Luciel’s Castle” were the royal court (government)
lived. The revolutioners managed to get guns, no one knew were they took them.
The traditional side tried to stop the attempt of the revolution, but they
were minor in number of soldiers, adding the fact that they did not have fire
weapons, just melee ones. -Hugo
The man took off his mask and Marcelo sighed with relief when he saw that
it was his boss and friend Lmao, the leader of the revolutionary side. Lmao
thanked Marcelo for keeping the microchip at all costs but it was false, the
real content of the microchip was 48 hours of cats videos. It was an specific
plan designed by Lmao, he had already sent a copy of the microchip to the Iran
government and they sent them the guns, that's how the revolutionary side had
made the attack to Luciel's castle. The problem is that they have made another
enemy, Irán… Pablo
When the leader of the Iranian government realised the trap that had been
set for them they became the biggest enemy that the revolution could
imagine to have. They started their plan by joining forces with the government,
it wasn't much difficult as the Allies didn't know it was them who
provided fire weapons to the revolutionaries. Irán main leader, had everything
planned, he already imagined that this could happen and decided not to sold all
the weapons they promised to the revolutionaries and keep a part, just in case,
a part which now would be used against them. Isabel
Obviously, the first thing Iran cut of the weapon supply they were giving
to Lmao. Moreover, Iran did not give their most powerful weapon to them, they
did not even now about the existence of it. However, there was a big problem,
an ethical dilemma. The weapon they had created was extremely powerful, it
would probably kill many innocent people, but they were in the middle of a war.
By Sofía
The revolutionary side was in a huge problem. Lmao didn't know how to
handle the situation. Iran made an alliance with Luciel,now the government had
access to fire weapons too. In that situation of panic, Emily, Lmaos girlfriend
came to his room and slap his face. She told him "what the hell are you
thinking about? You knew this was gonna happen we just need to follow the plan
that we had". He looked at her and smiled, he started packing things up
and went outside. By Moe
Lmao’s big brother was called Donald Trump and he was the president of the
United States , he was the one that teached Lmao the importance of guns, and
that is why Lmao started this war ,because Donald was a role model for him. So
he called Trump telling him that as followed the plan they were going to need
from him the best weapon ever known and more guns. So this way Trump got the
USA into the war to help his little brother . Now the war was between the
revolutionary side and the USA vs the classical side of the Alliance and Iran.By Roxana
The royal court was celebrating, as they thought that with Iran in their
side, victory was theirs, but, they did not know what Trump was planning to do,
he would use this conflict to develop chemical weapons, which were considered
illegal. After a series of minor battles all across the Alliance, Lmao and
Trump decided to start their final plan, to isolate Luciel, and use chemical
weapons to kill all the population, even though this ment killing some fellow
revolutionaries, it would be for the best, as they thought taking the capital
would bring an end to this conflict once and for all. By Pedro
Somehow they isolated Luciel and killed the whole population. Trump
couldn't be happier or more proud of his little brother. This didn't just mean
war had finished, but also, USA demonstrated they had the better army, and the
better weapons. However, some legal problems appeared on the table. The
security committee of the United Nations wasn't happy with those illegal
weapons. Huge consequences were about to happen. By Ana Pérez Narváez
The United Nations Security Council wasn’t happy about the genocide that
had just been perpetrated, so Russia and the European Union voted to condemn
the US Army’s actions, but the US Ambassador to the United Nations vetoed it.
Tensions grew between the two sides. Finally, a month later, a coalition of
Russia, Germany and France declared war on the United States. Italy did not
join the fight because of an argument between the center-left PD and the Five
Stars Movement over who was to be the commander-in-chief of a small army unit
from the region of Calabria. By Miguel de
Perosanz (IRL Italian politicians are as incompetent as the ones I describe
here)
US was not prepared enough for the war, but somehow, no one knew how, they
allied with their main enemy, North Korea, Kim Jong-un accepted a coalition
with the US after a meeting he had with Donald Trump, in which Donald payed him
some ladies for having some fun. They took Luciel’s army too, so there were the
two most powerful army, strengthened by Luciel’s army against the most
important countries of the EU and Russia. By Gonzalo Quintanilla
Marcelo was called up to the US army, and was ready to fight to defend the
freedom they had finally brought to the Alliance. The Alliance was in a region
of the Middle East, meaning petrol and natural gas were abundant, the reason
why Trump decided to help his brother Lmao. The war started, and this conflict
was the greatest war in the history of humanity, causing 80 millions deaths,
but Marcelo was not one of them. By Andrés
Rodríguez
Marcelo, after the fatal war was named vice president of the Alliance. Not
long after that, Lmao, Donald’s brother died of a terrible disease. Marcelo was
now the president and leader of his beloved country and was ready to defend it
at all cost. He never liked Trump, and now they were in debt with him and had
to pay a lot of the petrol money to the US government. So he decided to take a
very complicated plan into action involving the death of the president of the
United States. Manuel Ruiz
The plan was a total success, the president of US was dead and because of
that, the debt was paid due to all the money Trump had hidden. Although the
peace was restored in almost every country, Iran continue having some troubles
with the US, people thought this would lead to another war because the ambience
was really tense. After months of debating and discussion the solution to all
the problems was reached and everything began to be great and peaceful again. Elisa
The end
I really liked this story , the only thing i could change is some characters´s names like Lmao´s name because at first i couldn´t realize that ,that was a name.Despite that the story was really interesting.
ResponderEliminarIt was truly a roller coaster. As you start reading, you expect the setting to be a magical fantasy world. It progressively becomes more realistic, when suddenly it is filled with action scenes, with people jumping out of helicopters and enemies breaking into high security facilities. After that, the comedic turn involving Donald Trump flips everything around once again.
ResponderEliminarIt's a little difficult to read, you have to pay a lot of attention and re-read a few fragments in order to keep track of who fighting who. But it is mostly coherent, and quite entertaining. Just when you think you know what's going to happen, you're hit with another plot twist.
- Alexa C.
I really liked this story because while you are reading you can believe what is happening because everything is surrealistic and you are always intrigued about what is going to happen next.
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