PEDRO'S
Chicago, 1972. It
was looking like another ordinary day for inspector Daniel James. He had
performed his daily morning routine and he arrived at the police station as
usual, little did he know what would happen next. As usual, he was called to
the scene of a murder. As soon as he arrived, he realised this murder was
different to any other he’d previously seen. Pedro Peñafiel
The body was lying
on the floor, lifeless, perfectly covered in plastic wrap. Not blood was seen.
Not a single bruise nor wound. The murderer did pay attention to the details as
if it was an artwork. A sudden shiver ran through his body. Ana Pérez
The murder seemed
impossible to solve. But, suddenly, Daniel found a possible cause, the conflict
between two rival families dating back to the days of the Great Depression. The
victim was a descendant of the Johannes family. The Johannes were the descendants
of a long line of bankers, dating back to the Gilded Age, who, as thousands of
Americans, went bankrupt in the Wall Street Crash of 1929. On the other hand,
the Thompsons, were a rich Anglo-American family… Miguel de Perosanz
The Thompsons were
well known for not just being a very rich and powerful family, but because one
member of the family was a member of the ‘Crips’, yes, that gang that is
extremely dangerous and aggressive and protect their members, so inspector
Daniel James start to investigate from those facts. Gonzalo Quintanilla
What Daniel found
shocked him. The ‘Crips’ not only were a gang but a worldwide organization
financed by several governments in order to persecute and kill communists. They
were the ones in charge of the distribution of the guns that were being used in
the current Vietnam War, making them completely untouchable. Andrés Rodríguez
He rushed his mind
back to the crime scene and thought: but why, this woman has never been in a
shooting or commited a crime of no type. She was a housewife who hadn't hurt a
fly in her life with two kids and a normal husband with a good job. So he kept
wondering, what must have caused the assassination of this beautiful
woman.
The inspector kept
investigating, little did he know what was going to happen next… As the
days were passing by, he realised that he had to return to the starting
point, because some pieces were missing, so he went to the crime scene,
where two cops were supposed to control that no one enter there. When he got
there he found the bodies of the two cops, they were killed with the same
technique but this time there was a note… Elisa
The inspector took
the note and opened it, however, he couldn’t understand anything at all. The
language was different, but also the typography. So, in order to translate it,
he called his sister, who apparently was an expert in all types of languages, so
she could investigate it. After one week, his sister explained him that the
language used in the note was no longer alive. It was a language used by the
Nabateans, a civilization that lived long ago in the south of Palestine. She
also explained to him that the girl that had been murderer was one of the few
people that knew that language. Right after she had finished talking, Daniel
James realised his sister was in danger. Jacobo
The first thing he
did was to come back to the police station and ask one of his coworkers to do a
research about how many people knew that language, their names and addresses.
Then he started to think about how could he get infiltrate in The
Thompson’s activities and which member of the family would be the devil link.
After a while thinking and searching information about all of them, he knew
what to do and how to do it. Laura
He created himself
a new personality and identity. He was now one of the most famous people who
knew that language. He needed the Thomsons to think he was an expert, so that
they try to kill him. It was very complicated, but things could go well. He
followed one of the members of the family, holding a book about the nabataean
civilisation. Then he made a false phone call talking about the little lecture he
was giving next Saturday in the library, and assuring that he was talking loud
enough so that everyone could hear him. Now he only had to think on a plan
which worked successfully and avoiding his own death. Javier
His plan to trap
the Thomsons was very easy and simple, but it needed to be perfectly executed
or the whole operation would fail.
The plan was made
out of three factors. The first factor was library guards, they needed to
ensure the Thomsons didn't bring any weapons inside the lecture so they couldn't
hurt anybody. The second factor was that they needed undercover cops inside the
lecture so they could detain them and the last factor was the outside cover of
cops so they couldn't escape from the inside. Sergio Vara
It was 11-7, the
year were the Nabatean Kingdom started ruling. The lecture was advertised all
over the media. The headliners were filled with the announcement that a new
expert on Nabataean culture had made their appearance into the Chicago
University.
Inside the
university two hundred cops awaited to the appropriate instant to implement the
foolproof plan. In the centre of the room, Daniel James, wearing an outfit
characteristic of a distinguished historian. Nicolás Bagur
Daniel James was
very nervous at first because he didn't know if the plan was going to turn out
well or badly. His whole body was shaking because he was also armed, with
a pistol that a police officer had given him. He thought that if the plan did
not go well, everyone would look badly after him and disappoint all the police
and political forces. Ana Baños
He took a deep
breath, and, after a fifteen minute delay, the plan was started. As expected,
the Thompsons did not bring any weapons with them, but the police could not
confirm if their escorts were armed. The rest of the plan was going smoothly.
The lecture started nothing strange seemed to be happening, until one of the
escorts recognised Daniel. Carlo Cabrera
He could see him
whisper something to the Thompsons, though he continued his lecture with
normality as he kept his eye on them. After an hour, he called for a break,
during which he went over to the bathroom. Daniel splashed his face with water
and let out some shaky breaths. He was a brilliant man, but he was young and
very inexperienced in combat, which he thought might be inevitable now that his
identity was discovered and his plan was put at risk. As he looked down at the
sink, he heard the cocking of a gun. Alexa C.
He immediately
went out of the bathroom and saw a massive shooting between the two
sides, the policemen and the Thomson family, at first he didn't know how to
react but it was then when he saw his friend Marcelo lying dead in the floor
with a shot mark in his head, ipso factum he drew out his gun and started
shooting, he was good at the firing ranges but he never had been in a situation
like that before, in a matter of seconds he shot three Thompsons members in the
head, unfortunately they also reached Daniel and shot him in his leg which
later they had cut off. Stefan
Daniel was
withering in pain. He was dealing with so much pain that he didn't feel any
kind of guiltiness for killing 3 members of the Thompson family. It was only a
few days later when he realized what he had done. Daniel found out that the
three people passed out. He was also accused of murder by the Thompson family.
One member of that family shot him and made him lose his leg, that was one
point in favor of the two he had. Daniel also had the proof that they knew
Nabataean, that is the language in which the note that was placed next to the
two murdered cops was written. Ariana
Despite the fact
of knowing all of this, Daniel needed more proofs to ensure the relationship
between the Thompsons and the murder of the woman. He needed someone with
information, so he decided to call an old friend called Daniel Hernández, who
was part of the Blood gang. He financed the gang by making trap music, his
artist name was 6ix9ine. The Blood gang has been the eternal rival of the
Crips, so they had a lot of people infiltrated in it. Daniel Hernández helped
Daniel James by providing him very important information about the Crips and
the Thompsons. José
After several days
collecting information, they started tying up dots, searching in documents from
50 years ago, investigating the ancestors of the family, the ones who created
the mafia..
Daniel managed to
get a prosthetic leg in order to kept with the investigation, however he knew
that after this case, he would retire. -Hugo
Thanks to the
information given by his old friend, he encountered a bigger problem than where
he was already. He found that not only was there a dispute between two mafias,
but that the governments of many countries were also involved. Daniel reported
his investigation to the FBI and they agreed to take the case, making Daniel a
new member because of his insightful intelligence. As his new Sargent said
after reading his report; " the war have just started Daniel". -Pablo
Daniel
unexpectedly rejected this offer, he was tired of that exhausting and risky
job. However, before he retired he had to make sure to solve the murder of the
poor woman. He knew the Thompsons were involucrated in it, and that the most
probable was that they were the responsible for the letter, but he wasn't
totally sure, anyway he just needed proves to injail the guilty of the murder
and everything would end.
After a long time
thinking Daniel had a great idea. He was going look to for all the people
living in Chicago that knew Nabatean, later, one of his team members would go
to their respective houses, claiming to belong to an ONG against poverty
suffered by children and asking for firms. This way, the police would have the
handwriting of each of the possible assassins. The last step was comparing
handwriting from the note with the one of the firm and the truth would be discovered.
Isabel
The plan was
extremely simple, but it was working perfectly. There was not a lot of people
who knew this language and he was only interested in the Thompsons. However,
there was something he hadn't thought about Nabatean was written with different
characters, so he could not say it was a valid proof. He had to think about
something else and he was running out of time, he only had two days left until
the trial. By Sofía
He spended night
and day thinking about what to do. But nothing was coming out of his mind, he
didn't have a clue of what he should do. So he thought it was time for him to
retire he was old enough to follow this type of cases , 55 years he has been
working for this. Even though for the past days he wanted to retire after this
murder was solved, he just didn't want to. And that's what he did. The day of
the trial arrived. He went there and told everyone the case was closed. By Moe
He was feeling so bad ,but he couldn’t take this case
for more years .The case was officially closed ,then he went back to his office
and started packing everything from his desk because he got retired from his
job . He sold his house and bought a little house next to beach where he moved
with his wife and his new born baby called Sarah .They were ready to have
a good and relaxed life.After so many years of taking care of other people’s
lives , now he was ready to make sure that now was time for him to enjoy life. By Roxana
THE
END🤍
Great police story, a pity that the case isn't resolved in the end.
ResponderEliminarI really liked this story. It could even be turned into a series or a movie. I think that the use of Nabataean language as a possible proof that could lead Daniel James to solve the case is very original. I would have liked more an ending where he solved the case, but the story still ends on a high note.
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