SOFIA'S
Once upon a time,
there was a planet where no life existed. However, one day there was a massive
explosion and the first being appeared. For some unknown reason, he was the
only one in this planet for a while. Until another explosion took place and
another being was created. They met each other, but they did not get on well.
They were very different from each other. The first one, Alexander, was green,
big and friendly. Conversely, the second being, Noah, was blue, bossy and
simple. By Sofía
As time passed by,
each of them created their own house three kilometers apart, using the rubble
formed by the last explosion. They were living as the other one did not exit,
but one day another explosion took place and another being was created. This new
being was different from both of them, it was a girl. Her name was Lisa, she
was purple, kind and friendly. As a consequence she started getting on well
with Alexander, from the very first moment Alexander made her feel comfortable.
On the other hand, at first Noah did not care, as he liked being alone. By Moe
One day Noah
decided to go for his daily walk, but then he saw Lisa, it was not his first
time seeing her, but this time he felt something different, that’s when he
realized he was getting feelings for her. The next day he went for another walk
to see her again, but suddenly he realized that this time Lisa wasn’t alone,
she was with Alexander. By Roxana
He was absolutely
devastated by the sight of it. Although he never had the guts to tell Lisa the
feelings he had for her, he felt betrayed by Alexander. He decided that if he
wanted to conquer her, he needed to take some action. He started going out more
frequently just to meet with her during his walks, so that he could get to know
her. By Pedro
Lisa started
noticing his more than frequent presence after the second week. And decided to
take action and ask him why he was following her all the time. Noah was totally
speechless, in a sudden his face turned red. Lisa realized about what was
happening and decided to say with a sweet and kindly voice that if he needed
something he just needed to ask. Immediately Noah's light bulb lighted up. By Ana Pérez
He asked Lisa to
be friends, and they went to Alex’s house together. Life was fairly lonely in
this planet, where life would only appear by spontaneous generation and
Darwin’s laws wouldn’t apply. When they entered the house, they discussed how
to create an object to open and close the house’s entrance. But Noah was
nervous, and he stuttered, saying I do-do-don’t… So they decided to call the
object door. This was a great step in their primitive architecture. By Miguel de Perosanz
However, Noah’s
feelings for Lisa did not disappear, on the contrary, they were strengthening,
but he did not say anything to her because he was nervous, and each time they
were alone, he loved her more, but became more nervous, and Alexander passed
more time with her, so Noah became each time more jealous. By Gonzalo Quintanilla
Noah’s desire made
him delusional, and started imagine how good his lonely life would be if he
were alone with Lisa all the time. He got to a conclusion: he should kill
Alexander. The thing is he didn’t know how. How was he supposed to know how to
end life, if he didn’t even know how it worked? So he started studying himself,
making bizarre experiments in order to understand life and learn how to end it.
By Andrés Rodríguez
Noah started by
cutting his hair, it didn’t seem to hurt or anything so he kept doing it until
none was left. The next day he was so ashamed to go out for his walk because
Lisa would see how weird he looked. So the decision of trying to hurt Alexander
just hurt him. That was the lesson he learnt, to never try and hurt the rest of
the creatures no matter how different they were.Finally with this knowledge
acquired the next day he went out and was more kind to both of his neighbours. Manuel Ruiz
After being kind
for a lot of days the universe wanted to award Noah with another being, Maya,
she was perfect for Noah, she had yellow skin and was very bossy like Noah but
she was kind and a very good person. When Noah saw her he completely forgot
about Lisa. But the worst was yet to come… Elisa
The creation of
Maya was meant to reward Noah, however, as the days passed, she spent more and
more time with Lisa. At some point, both Noah and Alexander were left alone,
and the two girls were constantly together. Due to her actions, both boys also
started to get along, as they both had something in common: they had been left
behind by one of the girls. As the months passed by they had changed so much
that they end it up splitting their small society into “male” and “female”,
changing completely the future generations. Jacobo
Now that they were
divided in this two groups, the differences in behaviours between them started
to get bigger and bigger. One day they all met in a lake not far away from
their houses, once there Noah’s feelings for Lisa started to appear again but
this time Maya fell in love with him. Back home Maya explained Lisa how she was
feeling and for her surprise Lisa didn’t react how she expected. Laura
Lisa was dating
Alex, but she still loving Noah. In this love triangle, Alex loves Lisa, Lisa
and Maya love Noah, and Noah… Noah was all confused. After several days
spending time with Alex, they had criticized both Maya and Lisa a lot without
their knowledge. And it has been fun for a while. But that was only because
Noah loved them both, and he didn't wanted Alex to notice. What should he do?
The most coherent thing: dating both of them. Nobody knew about that, and
everyone could get angry if this was known. Lisa was cheating on Alex so she
wouldn't say anything to him, but what if Lisa and Maya talked? Would they
discovered it? Javier
Noah decided to
tell them both at the same time that he was in love with both of them and that
the only way of him dating them was to be in a relationship all three of them.
Maya accepted but Lisa had a lot of doubts, she didn't know if dating him was
going to be better than dating Alex and she was also scared because of the the
reaction Alex would have. The next day she went for a walk and she started to
think what she should do and she got to the conclusion that she must follow
what her heart tells her to do so that's what she did and she accepted too. Sergio Vara
The three of them
started being together and Alex was left aside. Alex started noticing that
nobody was interested on talking to him, he felt really isolated. That
loneliness provoked on him a serious depression that led into a mental illness.
He barely left his room. The feeling that neither Noah nor both girls did not
even were willing to meet with him caused irreparable damages on him. Meanwhile, Noah felt the most fortunate being in the
world, and did not stop to think on his mate of life. The consequences that
this action would cause could never be imaginated by no one. Nicolás Bagur
One day the 4 of
them went out together. As always, Alex was left out and the other three
were very close together until suddenly Alex became very nervous and a fury ran
through him that exploded and a flame of fire came out of his head. The other
three were surprised and scared because they did not know what the fire
was. Maya decided to approach Alex and touch the fire, which burned and
hurt herself. Ana Baños
Maya died as a
result of these burns, and so did Alex and Lisa, leaving Noah alone once again.
He went home, and started crying, he did not feel like he did at the beginning,
when he did not care about being alone, he was now sad. He stayed on his house
for the following weeks, remembering his friends, until, that day, when
everything completely changed for him once again. Carlo Cabrera
An explosion
occurred once again, which revived Noah's three friends, but they'd forgotten
everything that had happened between them. It was disheartening to see that his
buddies had no recollection of him, but it gave him the opportunity to fix all
of his wrongdoings. He realized where he went wrong, how he never gave Alex a
chance, and how selfish he had been. He realized that the solution was for them
to have a polyamorous relationship. Alexa C.
So this time Noah
had a magnifique idea, burning them to death, thinking they will revive again
and again until they all do what he wanted, but this time a new explosion
didn’t bring them back, instead it brought just Maya, the universe told Noah
that this time he shall not do more impurities, the explosion brought
vegetation and animals which appeared to be less intelligent than them,
it also said that they were its best creation. Noah was happy for once, no one
could ruin his life again. One day Maya heard a voice, it was an animal with no
legs that the universe called snake, which asked her if she could eat from the
tree of knowledge of good and evil, and Maya replied that the universe clearly
said they weren't allowed to eat from that tree. Stefan
The snake
hypnotized Maya and said that if she ate from the tree, she would be a wise
being, and she would be allowed to know the miracle of life. She could also
make more beings appear, that would be like her followers on a planet where she
would be considered as a goddess. Maya stood up and came closer to the tree.
She grabbed a fruit, and at the right moment, Noah appeared and yelled to Maya
that she shouldn't make this fool. Noah got the fruit she was holding, and with
a rock, he killed the snake. Abruptly the tree exploded. Ariana
Maya was upset
because she really wanted to be a goddess, but Noah told her that they should
follow very carefully the rules set by the universe, because if not, there
would be bad consequences. Maya then asked Noah why the universe had created an
animal that wanted to make them break the rules, at which Noah could not
answer. The universe told them that this was to test if it could trust both of
them. Maya asked the universe what would have happened if she ate from the
tree, but the universe did not answer to this question. Suddenly, another
explosion took place, but they did not know who it was. José
This explosion did
not create another being, it created lakes, waterfalls and oceans.
It was the first
time that Noah and Maya saw the water, they had never seen a thing in liquid
state. They got closer to a lake and looked the lake seeing their reflects on
it, they were discovering new things and having fun. Maya, without thinking on
it, she started “walking” over the lake, but to her surprise, she fell in the
water and started to sink. -Hugo
Noah was
terrified, his only friend was sinking in the ocean, he noticed that if he gets
in, he will sink too so he grabbed a branch from a tree and Maya was able to
get out. After this stressful moment Noah took a bit of water to their home in
order to study it. One day, when they were both lying on the grass a pig
appeared, they were really confused, they didn't know what was that, and they
got even more confused when the pig started talking. The pig said that she was
Lisa, after her death the universe gave her another opportunity but she didn't
expected to reincarnate into a strange pink and fat thing. -Pablo
Maya and Noah were
very surprised, but they didn't know the weirdest was about to come. Suddenly
they heard a noise, someone telling “i finally see you again friends”, they
both started looking around but they see noone, in that moment a blue, banana
shaped thing appeared from the water. The animal resulted to be Alexander,
their old friend, and he wasn't alone, next to him there were thousand of
marine creatures in very different shapes.
Many years later this place had become a wonderful world of living things, where plants vegetation and animals inhabited. The surprising thing about it was that the two unique human creatures that existed, where those same as in the beginning. Noah and Maya unlike the rest of living beings, that reproduced, evolved and died, had not changed at all since they appeared, they still living in that world which they now consider their world. Somehow Mayas desry of been a goddess had been fulfilled, maybe she didn't know yet which was the miracle of life, but for now, along with Noah, she was the one who controlled everything that happened in it. Isabel
What I love the most about this story is the creativity and the characters in it.When I follow the story , In my head i was expecting a different end.
ResponderEliminarI do not really know what type of end I was thinking of when I started this story. It was definitely not this one. However, I like they it turned and specially some funny parts like the one they discovered fire.
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